12-11-2014, 07:44 PM
Hey Nowio! First of all, good luck with the challenge! That's quite a goal you set yourself! Go for it! (:
About your new stuff; that's quite some work you already did! Sometimes your lines look a bit rushed and your sketches lose quality. Although it's important to put out as much as you can, I think you should still take your time to make sure that the underlying construction and stuff is laid out properly. Also, I think your short gestures have a little bit too much detail. Maybe it's a personal preference, but I struggled with short gestures so much, and it only worked out for me when I left out more and more details and just concentrated on the lines of action.
Keep up working! (:
About your new stuff; that's quite some work you already did! Sometimes your lines look a bit rushed and your sketches lose quality. Although it's important to put out as much as you can, I think you should still take your time to make sure that the underlying construction and stuff is laid out properly. Also, I think your short gestures have a little bit too much detail. Maybe it's a personal preference, but I struggled with short gestures so much, and it only worked out for me when I left out more and more details and just concentrated on the lines of action.
Keep up working! (: