03-13-2015, 01:49 AM
I see someone likes Nintendo, heh.
One thing I would say is that your lines could use some work in those pen drawings, they're a little bit messy at the moment. A tip I can suggest to get better, more confident lines is to make quick strokes with the pen, which can produce more precise, cleaner lines. Takes a bit of practice though. Another thing I can suggest is to perhaps make little strokes above the paper before actually placing lines, as it can help you get a more precise trajectory for your lines. I can see you've shaded those drawings, which is good, but again the shading looks a bit scribbly. Perhaps you could try a method such as cross-hatching.
Anyway, you've got some good stuff so far. Keep it coming!
One thing I would say is that your lines could use some work in those pen drawings, they're a little bit messy at the moment. A tip I can suggest to get better, more confident lines is to make quick strokes with the pen, which can produce more precise, cleaner lines. Takes a bit of practice though. Another thing I can suggest is to perhaps make little strokes above the paper before actually placing lines, as it can help you get a more precise trajectory for your lines. I can see you've shaded those drawings, which is good, but again the shading looks a bit scribbly. Perhaps you could try a method such as cross-hatching.
Anyway, you've got some good stuff so far. Keep it coming!