04-27-2015, 11:46 PM
Thanks for stopping by my sketchbook! I have to agree your rendering is very nice. I like your colors as well. Your compositions could be stronger though. You mentioned doing more speed paints to work on this. I'd do thumbnails to try to explore as many ideas as possible. The problem with a speed paint as a comp study is its more about slapping something together that readable to other people. With a thumbnail its just for you so theres no need to make things look like anything. Use abstract shapes as place holders and explore basic elements of balance, contrast, focal points and overlapping shapes. Just my 2 cents!