06-21-2015, 10:40 PM
Nice still life! Looks like a real challenge. One crit for next time: Watch your edges - right now, you have both soft and hard edges in your painting (which is good), but they don’t all look very deliberately placed. The crisp, straight edge in the foreground for example draws a lot of attention, which I am not sure is intended since it’s not really an important area - instead, try placing some hard edges, crisp details and highest contrasts in places where you want us to look.
Still looking great though, good job!
How’s the personal project coming along?
Still looking great though, good job!
How’s the personal project coming along?