07-04-2015, 04:18 PM
Awesome sketchbok man.
About the asian girl (?) in the last update, give some extra time to rendering the forms that happen around your mouth and cheecks when somebody smiles, I know it's a girl and you are trying to have as few lines as possible, but you don't have to straight up draw the folds in the skin, you can keep it simple, because without those forms it feels like there's something lacking between the smiling mouth and the squinting eyes. Also not sure if it's intentional but the upperlip is generaly more concave, when you keep it straight it kinda feels like she has underbite.
Good job m8 :)
About the asian girl (?) in the last update, give some extra time to rendering the forms that happen around your mouth and cheecks when somebody smiles, I know it's a girl and you are trying to have as few lines as possible, but you don't have to straight up draw the folds in the skin, you can keep it simple, because without those forms it feels like there's something lacking between the smiling mouth and the squinting eyes. Also not sure if it's intentional but the upperlip is generaly more concave, when you keep it straight it kinda feels like she has underbite.
Good job m8 :)