09-07-2015, 04:29 AM
(09-07-2015, 02:15 AM)lurch Wrote: In the interests of saying something constructive beyond just liking your stuff, I think the character could maybe use some harder edges, or lines (facial detail lines, like those deep creases you get under eyes or around noses) to define it a bit more? I dunno tho.
I also thought the far eye looked a little low but I'm not sure, might just be me struggling to translate the angle across!
the evil looking girl with the dagger would be a cool one to develop too.
Hey I meant to say, if you haven't seen their work already check out etam cru. they drop some nice characters.
thanks for the feedback , yeh I thought that the character needs more hard edges. I think because I softened everything the whole piece lacks a point of interest to look at. Yeh the eye does look a little weird now that you have mentioned it. I will definatly develop the girl though.
ahhh yeh im familiar with Etam Cru, their stuff is sooo cool, love the characters they create thanks for the feedback though Lurch.
I decided to enter in this weeks CHOW Rusalka. I have done some thumbnails and general ideas, this is what I have atm.