10-18-2015, 03:03 AM
Hey there guys! So I decided to choose one of my thumbnails and fix it up following the critique.
This one:
The thing that I gathered the most from the critique was my lack of overlapping shapes overall on all of my illustrations in order to create depth. I came up with this, but am still struggling with the perspective on the building.
I don't want to make it flat, but I don't know how to make it fit alright. I still need more practice with the perspective.
Please feel free to critique the image as a whole in any way you see fit, or to paint over it. Thank you!
This one:
The thing that I gathered the most from the critique was my lack of overlapping shapes overall on all of my illustrations in order to create depth. I came up with this, but am still struggling with the perspective on the building.
I don't want to make it flat, but I don't know how to make it fit alright. I still need more practice with the perspective.
Please feel free to critique the image as a whole in any way you see fit, or to paint over it. Thank you!