02-08-2016, 07:26 PM
Lovely painting! I really enjoy the colors of the sky and the atmosphere it creates.
I think the girl on the right is better. I once heard something that Western culture prefers to have people/figures look to the right because of the reading direction and that for Asia it is the other way around.
I didn't make out it was a girl though, because she is turned to us with her back and has short hair. And I would expect hat mountain lakes/rivers are quite deep in the middle, especially when the water is that calm. So I would expect her to be further into the water. In your previous post the river looks a lot less deep because of the stone and the sand on the side of the river.
And I don't know where you want to focus, at the moment it is on the horizon because it is the brightest there.
I hope it is helpful. Keep up the good work!
I think the girl on the right is better. I once heard something that Western culture prefers to have people/figures look to the right because of the reading direction and that for Asia it is the other way around.
I didn't make out it was a girl though, because she is turned to us with her back and has short hair. And I would expect hat mountain lakes/rivers are quite deep in the middle, especially when the water is that calm. So I would expect her to be further into the water. In your previous post the river looks a lot less deep because of the stone and the sand on the side of the river.
And I don't know where you want to focus, at the moment it is on the horizon because it is the brightest there.
I hope it is helpful. Keep up the good work!