02-17-2016, 10:35 AM
Your rendering got better with that round brush and I love that scene with all the mechanics. The guy smoking is asking for a zoolander explosion. Your drawing is already very good, I think the next step to focus on accuracy of those lines and proportions of masses. I'm just guessing here but it looks like you are drawing from the feeling of where those contours turn(if that makes sense), which is good. But, I think the next step is to build on top of these gestural lines with accuracy.