03-17-2016, 01:03 PM
That last peace looks good, now you finally, finally actually finished it ;)
I like the way the background turned out this time too, less details, makes you concentrate on the characters up front more.
Good sketches too. The black and white ones. Perhaps try adding them more personality, they seem a bit faded/uninterested as they are. For instance, the The men in the suit with glasses could be a director or an employee? What are they sad/happy/angry about? Add items to describe their personality better, like pen, coffee, suitcase, etc
Hope this helps :)
I like the way the background turned out this time too, less details, makes you concentrate on the characters up front more.
Good sketches too. The black and white ones. Perhaps try adding them more personality, they seem a bit faded/uninterested as they are. For instance, the The men in the suit with glasses could be a director or an employee? What are they sad/happy/angry about? Add items to describe their personality better, like pen, coffee, suitcase, etc
Hope this helps :)