04-03-2016, 02:22 AM
Hey man, it looks great! Could be the cover of an Arya & The Hound comic book ^^ they're really recognisable as who they're supposed to be and breaking out of the panel gives it a larger than life, in your face feeling. The character designs are great too, and its a nice contrast with his angularity and the more soft shapes of her (could be pushed a bit more maybe?). The little paint spatter effects are nice too to break up the linearity of that kind of drawing.
The thing that is confusing is that the needle from her arm connects right to the hilt of his sword, when I first looked I thought it was like a leash, since she is kind of like his prisoner when they are together. I realised it wasn't after looking more carefully but the first read made me think that. Other thing that could improve it is varying line weights - thick lines going to thin as they recede into the distance (illustrator is really good for adding those kind of variations and keeping things consistent), or even just using a thicker line around their silhouettes to clearly separate them (like if you removed all the colour and value do the elements still separate easily? This could also help clear the confusion about her needle overlapping him instead of attaching to him if there is a thicker line weight around it).
Looking forward to seeing your next entry in CC2 ^^
The thing that is confusing is that the needle from her arm connects right to the hilt of his sword, when I first looked I thought it was like a leash, since she is kind of like his prisoner when they are together. I realised it wasn't after looking more carefully but the first read made me think that. Other thing that could improve it is varying line weights - thick lines going to thin as they recede into the distance (illustrator is really good for adding those kind of variations and keeping things consistent), or even just using a thicker line around their silhouettes to clearly separate them (like if you removed all the colour and value do the elements still separate easily? This could also help clear the confusion about her needle overlapping him instead of attaching to him if there is a thicker line weight around it).
Looking forward to seeing your next entry in CC2 ^^