04-17-2016, 10:04 AM
Id say work on your values. Think how the darks and lights interact in the piece as a whole. That bottom right color thumb is a step in the right direction. The colors and values are better than the other 3. When planing the lights and darks of the composition think about contrasts and how each area of strong contrast draws the eye. I assume the creature is the focal point. I'd move the moon behind his head since its a bright value and the contrast created to its head will draw the eye in even more where you want it. Watch for tangents where two objects just barely dont overlap. It can break the sense of depth. Make sure objects clearly overlap or they are spaced enough apart. In the bottom right thumb theres a few tangents with the moon and the creatures head and with the hunters head and the back window. You're doing great though, keep it up!