04-18-2013, 06:41 PM
Yes, you do have me figured out when it comes to the low panel count. As a rule I won't go above six panels a page for free. Even for myself. As a reader I prefer it that way. Unless circumstances call for a claustrophobic mood or an exhausting sequence.
I didn't notice my habit of jamming my dialogue up top. Maybe I'll be more creative about dialogue placement on the next pass.
I can see the repetition now. I'm definitely going to dick around with the first page. I'm going to keep it repetitive on the 2nd page because I don't want Unfu's appearance to come out of nowhere. I also want the dust storm to get thicker. I think I might ad one more panel though. I think he needs to be clearly shown being pulled into the bunker.
I didn't notice my habit of jamming my dialogue up top. Maybe I'll be more creative about dialogue placement on the next pass.
I can see the repetition now. I'm definitely going to dick around with the first page. I'm going to keep it repetitive on the 2nd page because I don't want Unfu's appearance to come out of nowhere. I also want the dust storm to get thicker. I think I might ad one more panel though. I think he needs to be clearly shown being pulled into the bunker.