02-09-2012, 04:34 PM
Yes, good suggestions Dennis. I noticed when I cropped it I lost some of the excitement. Exaggerating the dutch tilt really keeps that intensity. I'm definitely scaling up the captain. I have to redraw his legs anyways. The poses are practically mirrored. It looks too self conscious.
Personally I think the chick is key to the narrative. It shows that it's a team. I read something about writing for team comics and it said 3 characters are just enough to convey a team and not flood the dynamic. Plus she brings a calm neutrality to the conflict and could give the viewer a curiosity.
Personally I think the chick is key to the narrative. It shows that it's a team. I read something about writing for team comics and it said 3 characters are just enough to convey a team and not flood the dynamic. Plus she brings a calm neutrality to the conflict and could give the viewer a curiosity.