02-02-2012, 09:59 PM
Hey thanks all :) It means a lot!
For crits, I did try warping the text, rich, but didn't seem to work too well! And Sprayah, heh, actually the original comp sketch the boy was dead on looking foward, but it didn't seem as natural, like capturing him in teh moment, it looked more "posed" I do see what you mean though, hopefully I can make it work.
Thanks for the input :)
This morning I tried some value compositions to see if I want to go more low, high or middle key for teh design, I want it a fairly dark tale, like not totally airy fairy, but still for kids, more PG not U rating. so I may go for one of the more low key ideas.
Done some colour roughs too I'll upload them next time!
![[Image: comps.jpg]](http://i465.photobucket.com/albums/rr16/AlexTooth/comps.jpg)
1inch thumbs.
![[Image: compstiny.jpg]](http://i465.photobucket.com/albums/rr16/AlexTooth/compstiny.jpg)
I'm leaning toward #5 #8 as 1inchs they seem to read best.
Somethin along these lines
![[Image: sketch8.jpg]](http://i465.photobucket.com/albums/rr16/AlexTooth/sketch8.jpg)
For crits, I did try warping the text, rich, but didn't seem to work too well! And Sprayah, heh, actually the original comp sketch the boy was dead on looking foward, but it didn't seem as natural, like capturing him in teh moment, it looked more "posed" I do see what you mean though, hopefully I can make it work.
Thanks for the input :)
This morning I tried some value compositions to see if I want to go more low, high or middle key for teh design, I want it a fairly dark tale, like not totally airy fairy, but still for kids, more PG not U rating. so I may go for one of the more low key ideas.
Done some colour roughs too I'll upload them next time!
1inch thumbs.
I'm leaning toward #5 #8 as 1inchs they seem to read best.
Somethin along these lines