10-02-2013, 04:32 AM
@adam-brown said already many good things. I would also mention to correct the anatomy of the girl especially the head and face. You would see underside of her nose only if her face would be bend back when I think you drawn it directed down. Because of this also her ear (?) should be higher. Armor design is nice but it's not drawn correctly in perspective and her boobs are really squished in it due to that. The left shoulder should be pushed back more and higher so she would not looks like she is hiding her head between her shoulders. With this red dessert environment you will have more orange shadow on her because of reflected light.
You can make her hair looks like a water element by drawing them like a water splash with floating small drops, just remember that water is transparent and will show some colors of the background through. And for composition sake I would not draw her hair touching frame edge.
Good luck and keep going! Cheers
You can make her hair looks like a water element by drawing them like a water splash with floating small drops, just remember that water is transparent and will show some colors of the background through. And for composition sake I would not draw her hair touching frame edge.
Good luck and keep going! Cheers