07-08-2014, 10:41 AM
The crow painting looks really good. It looks like you're using a ball point pen for some of those anatomy sketches? Using pen is a good way to improve your line quality. One thing I'd suggest is taking a tiny bit more time in between strokes to visualize the mark you'r about to make. Try even "ghosting the line" over the page first without making contact. That way you'll get use to making one decisive line instead of many uncertain scratchy lines. Keep up the good work!