07-31-2014, 09:45 PM
I don't understand why the glowing part are active if it clearly being under a light source.On a other note there is no clear explanation why all those wire are useful to the design maybe morph those wire into something else .The top part of the machine as no sense of depth because there is not much Overlapping in that part of the image also the light on the head doesnt help because it almost flatten the form. I would recommend you to add a simple background so you that the light on the head doesn't blend with the white background if it possible.Sorry for my comment that are design related.My best advice on rendering do some sphere made of different material and do a lot of still life but the most important use a light source that fit the mood.