08-01-2016, 01:41 AM
Hey, just wanted to jump in on the edges discussion, I hope you don't mind -
I'm not sure it's the edges so much as the values that are important. You have high contrast scattered all over the image, so by bringing the values closer together in areas that don't need attention (using atmospheric perspective for example) you could make the image more harmonious and an easier read for the viewer. Did a quick paintover with an airbrush to show what I mean:.
Original:
Paintover with adjusted values:
Anyway, overall congrats on an awesome job on CC5. The rendering looks awesome and super studies and planning :)
I'm not sure it's the edges so much as the values that are important. You have high contrast scattered all over the image, so by bringing the values closer together in areas that don't need attention (using atmospheric perspective for example) you could make the image more harmonious and an easier read for the viewer. Did a quick paintover with an airbrush to show what I mean:.
Original:
Paintover with adjusted values:
Anyway, overall congrats on an awesome job on CC5. The rendering looks awesome and super studies and planning :)
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