01-22-2020, 02:18 AM
I feel like your rendering is straddling between notan and like rendered edges... With how stylized your work is, it might be good to push the graphic read more, like in your last one above this comment. The characters are clean cutouts and they looks good, whereas the rest is a bunch of painterly blobs; I think if you stylized those blobs as a clear flat shape, that'd look more appealing. Same with the snow,
https://webneel.com/sites/default/files/...%20(7).jpg
See like in this, each shape is clear and has a purpose, and ties the cartoon world together. I think the blurry painterly look fits well with realism like waterhouse, but if you look close even he has clearly designed shapes of trees and such. You seem to be enclosing on this concept, and i think if youre aware you could push those shapes harder and itd pay off quick.
https://i.imgur.com/19vYrEr.jpg
Like youre kind of executing it here, but those arent appealing clouds, sam neilson has really well designed enviro pieces, so look at some of those for ideas
https://webneel.com/sites/default/files/...%20(7).jpg
See like in this, each shape is clear and has a purpose, and ties the cartoon world together. I think the blurry painterly look fits well with realism like waterhouse, but if you look close even he has clearly designed shapes of trees and such. You seem to be enclosing on this concept, and i think if youre aware you could push those shapes harder and itd pay off quick.
https://i.imgur.com/19vYrEr.jpg
Like youre kind of executing it here, but those arent appealing clouds, sam neilson has really well designed enviro pieces, so look at some of those for ideas
70+Page Koala Sketchbook: http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-3465.html SB
Paintover thread, submit for crits! http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-7879.html
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Paintover thread, submit for crits! http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-7879.html
[color=rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.882)]e owl sat on an oak. The more he saw, the less he spoke.[/color]