Razor's 2019 Sketchbook

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With a quick lay over the original you can see that her right shoulder is way lower than you indicated and you have her a bigger butt than she have.To give you point you did a pretty good job on her head proportion.Just make sure to check for the negative shape around the silhouette to gauge your coutour and proportion.Also alway check for the direction and angle of the shoulder.