10-11-2019, 02:47 PM
I think there definitively to much space being use for the text it steal the show to much white space around also text.Also you should think more about the rythme and format of the box.I never have seen a scroll like comic and i think that there a reason for that.Also there some missed information i feel like there should be a transformation box for when he turn into an horse you didn't bother doing for it would be to complex to figure out... but the fact that the horse talk kinda help sell the idea he just transformed so idk up to you.