11-04-2019, 09:07 AM
(11-02-2019, 07:36 AM)Fedodika Wrote: I LOVE SKEENY WIINNY GIRLS!!O-Okay..! Ha. I'm glad you do! *Thumbs up*
(11-02-2019, 11:05 AM)Leo Ki Wrote: I hope you are crushing that sickness, Rotohail. Be well!
Might be your comfort zone, but the three pieces have good design and posture. The knight pulling the dragon's tongue is ace.
Here are a few critiques in this drawover. Let me know if they are not clear and I will elaborate. I might be wrong on the last one - I'm assuming he's about to strike but that may not be the case.
I was done for until Friday, but I'm rocking myself once again. Sunshine everywhere now. Ah.. so nice. Thanks Leo Ki.
I think the dragon/monster didn't came off all too well, I need to study lizards next I guess!
Thanks for the critiques! Yeah I fucked up the robots legs, I have that issue where I don't match designs and I don't even notice, I'm trying to work on that, pay more attention, but till. Happened the same with the girl! I left it there but I noticed the pattern around the groin doesn't match, also another bit below the knees, don't match. Those things I only notice after some time! Which is troublesome. Hoping with experience I can notice them faster so I can fix before moving onto other stages. I guess more drawing! Is on the menu, ha. What's new?!
The girl, more than the ribcage, I think the issue were the breast, poorly placed. I think I fixed it now? Maybe not.Let me know.
I reworked the guy, I think the arm raised was way to long? Also gutted the shoulder without noticing. Hope now it works better/is more consistent.
Anyhow colored page, rushed it and should had done more with colors but maybe keep things simpler might help me not overwork stuff. Or just being plain lazy! Dealer's choice. The girl I wanted more cheerful, magical girl vibes, which I don't usually do but they fit the mood. So Upping that saturation there! The warrior is too bright, I would darken more shadow points to give more contrast, taking notes. Contrast seems to always be an issue that keeps coming over to spend the night and then never let's me have any rest. Oh well, at least makes me company. #Marrying-your-bad-habits
