12-19-2022, 01:29 PM
I think that a great presentation and the texture of the table is nice and the pen are a cool peek into the process in term of tool being utilized.Great study on form i think that really the first time i feel as if i could grab something out of the paper.
For the batmen piece my advise would be to color your shadow following the volume rather than to just fill the space. Atleast that way the ''stripping'' contribute to creating a subtle wireframe type effect.
If you shade flat you will ultimately i believe remove some of that volume just as i said due to the stripping effect no longer following the form.
Also i invite you to look at the bat symbol for example and zoom in to look that he is deliberatly shading to avoid that flatttening.One other thing to consider is the paper and marker if you use marker you want a paper that doesn't drink to much ink and give you strong black maybe the marker is old and need to be refill maybe it just the lighting that is catching the ink a certain way because some ink might be more reflective than other.But most of the stripping effect i believe as to do with the alchool in the marker which determine how fast it dry don't quote me on that.
You can always do more of the hatching to distract from that undesired effect that an other alternative but you would need a finer pen because that one you use was kinda to thic compare to the reference.(We do with what we have i get it...)
Anyway sorry for the nitpick rambling if you find that useful that even greater.
For the batmen piece my advise would be to color your shadow following the volume rather than to just fill the space. Atleast that way the ''stripping'' contribute to creating a subtle wireframe type effect.
If you shade flat you will ultimately i believe remove some of that volume just as i said due to the stripping effect no longer following the form.
Also i invite you to look at the bat symbol for example and zoom in to look that he is deliberatly shading to avoid that flatttening.One other thing to consider is the paper and marker if you use marker you want a paper that doesn't drink to much ink and give you strong black maybe the marker is old and need to be refill maybe it just the lighting that is catching the ink a certain way because some ink might be more reflective than other.But most of the stripping effect i believe as to do with the alchool in the marker which determine how fast it dry don't quote me on that.
You can always do more of the hatching to distract from that undesired effect that an other alternative but you would need a finer pen because that one you use was kinda to thic compare to the reference.(We do with what we have i get it...)
Anyway sorry for the nitpick rambling if you find that useful that even greater.