From a cube to a cathedral (CLASS CLOSED)
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Karnich- this last piece looks great. I followed the whole thread and you improved along the way quite a lot. The shadows look good to me, the only thing that stands out is that maybe because your VP is too close some things look more distorted than normal, like the car looks longer than it should be and the windshields look a bit squished. Not a lot of room for the driver too see the road :P

Isra- Thanks for the encouragement, but please don't worry (at least from my end) Watching your videos is a great way to learn, and while personalized tips would be appreciated :) between the critiques and the classes I am finding plenty of mistakes and stuff to learn.

Week 4 is a bit late Feb 5- 12

I wanted to add some human interest in the empty right side, like a guy riding in on a horse or a woman saying goodbye to a cowboy. it ended up looking horrible. Will have to revisit once I do a few animals in perspective.

Also halfway through I realized the main store building probably looks too modern, but I didn't want eveyrthing to be made out of wood so I kept it. Hopefully it doesn't clash too badly...although that roof is slanted... damn it... will have to fix that.

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Week 5 Curved shapes Feb 12-Feb 17 (a bit early ;)

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RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by DomSinkevic - 10-28-2012, 06:42 AM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by Egbu - 10-28-2012, 07:32 AM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by isra-ac - 10-28-2012, 07:43 AM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by isra-ac - 10-29-2012, 03:27 AM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by JonHop - 10-31-2012, 11:32 PM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by JonHop - 11-01-2012, 11:52 PM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by DomSinkevic - 11-04-2012, 09:09 AM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by klungart - 11-04-2012, 05:43 PM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by Egbu - 11-04-2012, 10:15 PM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by isra-ac - 11-05-2012, 05:46 AM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by JonHop - 11-10-2012, 04:20 AM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by JonHop - 11-10-2012, 06:29 AM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by isra-ac - 11-10-2012, 06:52 AM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by JonHop - 11-10-2012, 07:39 AM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by JonHop - 11-11-2012, 03:32 AM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by klungart - 11-11-2012, 04:40 AM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by Egbu - 11-11-2012, 10:06 AM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by DomSinkevic - 11-11-2012, 11:21 AM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by isra-ac - 11-12-2012, 02:15 AM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by JonHop - 11-18-2012, 01:08 AM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by DomSinkevic - 11-18-2012, 08:54 AM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by Egbu - 11-18-2012, 09:31 AM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by isra-ac - 11-19-2012, 05:08 AM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by isra-ac - 11-19-2012, 08:03 PM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by klungart - 11-22-2012, 02:27 AM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by JonHop - 11-24-2012, 01:21 AM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by klungart - 11-25-2012, 08:15 AM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by Egbu - 11-25-2012, 09:59 AM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by DomSinkevic - 11-25-2012, 11:46 AM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by isra-ac - 11-26-2012, 04:09 AM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by JonHop - 12-02-2012, 01:32 AM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by isra-ac - 12-02-2012, 08:27 AM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by klungart - 12-02-2012, 10:18 AM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by DomSinkevic - 12-02-2012, 03:24 PM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by Egbu - 12-02-2012, 10:49 PM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by isra-ac - 12-03-2012, 07:52 AM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by Cj_marsh - 12-03-2012, 10:54 AM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by isra-ac - 12-03-2012, 11:06 PM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by Karnich - 12-06-2012, 02:55 AM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by judy - 12-08-2012, 01:10 AM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by Karnich - 12-08-2012, 10:23 PM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by DomSinkevic - 12-09-2012, 09:30 AM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by klungart - 12-09-2012, 10:27 AM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by isra-ac - 12-10-2012, 05:05 AM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by Egbu - 12-10-2012, 05:17 AM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by Karnich - 12-11-2012, 06:49 AM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by Anthony Carey - 12-12-2012, 12:35 PM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by Karnich - 12-12-2012, 06:43 PM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by judy - 12-12-2012, 08:03 PM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by Karnich - 12-13-2012, 09:00 PM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by Karnich - 12-16-2012, 02:26 AM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by isra-ac - 12-16-2012, 08:20 AM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by Egbu - 12-16-2012, 09:05 AM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by klungart - 12-16-2012, 10:36 AM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by DomSinkevic - 12-16-2012, 01:29 PM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by judy - 12-16-2012, 11:14 PM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by isra-ac - 12-17-2012, 06:10 AM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by Karnich - 12-21-2012, 09:55 PM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by judy - 12-23-2012, 09:22 AM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by DomSinkevic - 12-23-2012, 02:48 PM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by isra-ac - 12-24-2012, 08:19 AM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by judy - 12-24-2012, 10:13 PM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by Egbu - 12-24-2012, 08:42 AM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by isra-ac - 12-27-2012, 03:33 AM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by judy - 12-27-2012, 04:08 AM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by Karnich - 12-28-2012, 04:29 AM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by judy - 12-28-2012, 05:59 AM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by DomSinkevic - 12-28-2012, 06:01 AM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by Egbu - 12-28-2012, 06:10 AM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by isra-ac - 12-28-2012, 10:22 AM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by judy - 12-30-2012, 09:06 AM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by Karnich - 12-30-2012, 10:38 PM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by DomSinkevic - 12-30-2012, 11:00 PM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by Egbu - 12-30-2012, 11:12 PM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral - by isra-ac - 12-31-2012, 05:57 AM
RE: From a cube to a cathedral (CLASS CLOSED) - by dracken - 02-11-2013, 05:05 PM

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