03-17-2013, 12:16 AM
Yup melanie is very nice :)
Keep up the good work!
For the 'receiving of the sword' piece, try to set the scene so it looks like the woman really is coming from the water. Right now (could be just the sketch) she looks like she is crouching a little awkwardly where she should be able to stand.
One way to do this is by making the shoreline 'sharp' so it looks like the water is quite the sudden drop, and not gently sloping downwards.
I hope that made sense to you.
Keep up the good work!
For the 'receiving of the sword' piece, try to set the scene so it looks like the woman really is coming from the water. Right now (could be just the sketch) she looks like she is crouching a little awkwardly where she should be able to stand.
One way to do this is by making the shoreline 'sharp' so it looks like the water is quite the sudden drop, and not gently sloping downwards.
I hope that made sense to you.