05-30-2013, 07:06 AM
i love the colors on the last character, the character is also sweet, well done!
on your environment, yeah the building is built a bit freestyle :D just use a perspective grid, it helps so much. i think you should also raise the foreground a bit higher to achieve more depth. the mountain near the building distracts too much, you should balance it more imho... you could try to make the building smaller compared to the mountain, or vice versa, it also feels like the building is sticking too much to the right imho. you could consider rules of 3rd for it and use mountains to frame the building. just my thoughts, but awesome sketchbook!
i love how you render your faces, skillz!
on your environment, yeah the building is built a bit freestyle :D just use a perspective grid, it helps so much. i think you should also raise the foreground a bit higher to achieve more depth. the mountain near the building distracts too much, you should balance it more imho... you could try to make the building smaller compared to the mountain, or vice versa, it also feels like the building is sticking too much to the right imho. you could consider rules of 3rd for it and use mountains to frame the building. just my thoughts, but awesome sketchbook!
i love how you render your faces, skillz!
