01-04-2014, 09:04 AM
ugh, just looking at the fly on the eye creeps me out >_<
the spear lady painting is really nice, love her armour design (as impractical as it might be :P). As for some feedback: I agree with sizing the ear up a little bit, also maybe make it a little bit less red (more subtle color transition to her jaw color)? The midground feels a bit empty... depending on what the image is supposed to be used for I guess. For an illustration viewed at this size or bigger, maybe you could add some smaller elements (stones, dirt, ...) in the bottom third of the image. Or some kind of vignette, shifting the focus away from the empty parts in the edges of the image. And it's not sucking, I can't stop looking at her beautiful and confident face & beautiful armour!
the spear lady painting is really nice, love her armour design (as impractical as it might be :P). As for some feedback: I agree with sizing the ear up a little bit, also maybe make it a little bit less red (more subtle color transition to her jaw color)? The midground feels a bit empty... depending on what the image is supposed to be used for I guess. For an illustration viewed at this size or bigger, maybe you could add some smaller elements (stones, dirt, ...) in the bottom third of the image. Or some kind of vignette, shifting the focus away from the empty parts in the edges of the image. And it's not sucking, I can't stop looking at her beautiful and confident face & beautiful armour!