02-20-2014, 08:28 PM
Lovin all the hard work and progress going on Lyraina!
I hope you don't mind, I did a paintover of your bloodsport:
Just a few things I thought would have made the image more interesting:
- The image is very wide, so I cropped it to get rid of some empty space
-The purple plant in the foreground, as indicated by the current horizon line (white line), means that it would be very big compared to the swamp elder as its base is in line with his knees
-The smaller circled purple plant is lit in a way that makes it pop in front of everything else, also making the large purple plant look very huge
-Adding a little bit of two-point may make it more interesting (blue lines), so I indicated this with the path going to the hut
-His size compared to the scene makes him feel insignificant so I made him a little bigger. (Even if he's a small character)
-Also suggest adding more an indication of his shadow to ground him more onto the scene
So I hope this wasn't too out of line and is helpful! Feel free to call me on my questionable judgment haha. Really do like the final result though, keep up the awesomeness
I hope you don't mind, I did a paintover of your bloodsport:
Just a few things I thought would have made the image more interesting:
- The image is very wide, so I cropped it to get rid of some empty space
-The purple plant in the foreground, as indicated by the current horizon line (white line), means that it would be very big compared to the swamp elder as its base is in line with his knees
-The smaller circled purple plant is lit in a way that makes it pop in front of everything else, also making the large purple plant look very huge
-Adding a little bit of two-point may make it more interesting (blue lines), so I indicated this with the path going to the hut
-His size compared to the scene makes him feel insignificant so I made him a little bigger. (Even if he's a small character)
-Also suggest adding more an indication of his shadow to ground him more onto the scene
So I hope this wasn't too out of line and is helpful! Feel free to call me on my questionable judgment haha. Really do like the final result though, keep up the awesomeness
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