04-19-2013, 11:46 AM
I like it thus far. Seems like it aught to work okay without dialogue. It has enough rope to give yourself the necessary freedom since this is your first story. You may not need to write much of a script, because in this case the story serves the images, not the other way around. If you implement the "marvel method" where you just decide what needs to be conveyed on each page, and just go at it in the layout, you may have the freedom to really floss the ornate details that may be necessary.
If you want to be extra cautious, go ahead and write the script. Just keep in mind, most first time writers emphasize things that make it really hard on the artist. I have made that mistake myself.
If you want to be extra cautious, go ahead and write the script. Just keep in mind, most first time writers emphasize things that make it really hard on the artist. I have made that mistake myself.