wasp-whacking faerie
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It will be really hard to show emotions on wasp, insects don't have mimicry so it's not so obvious what it is thinking :D You could push it little further in narration to point when something is ALMOST happening. Wasp almost can grab fairy and fairy swings the stick and she will hit wasp in next second. Situation looks dangerous but joy shown by fairy should make it look like a fun. Maybe upgrade the stick to mace or hammer so it would be instantly readable as a weapon ?
Good job, keep it up :)


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wasp-whacking faerie - by warmics - 06-16-2013, 04:50 PM
RE: wasp-whacking faerie - by Madzia - 06-16-2013, 11:18 PM
RE: wasp-whacking faerie - by warmics - 06-17-2013, 01:19 AM

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