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[OtherMuzz]

Hey man thanks for taking the time to do that, me rebutting is more me running through my design choices and trying to explain them than challenging you I really appreciate the effort,

Yes the eyes were messed up, The tangent on the nose is indeed a problem but i don't think you can just move the nose to fix that, I'd have to rotate the whole head a bit, otherwise the nose won't be in the center of the head. I don't mind the mouth being flat, but point taken :).

I will explain some of the stuff that i think you misinterpreted in the clothes though (it was a messy sketch)

So the top is actually tucked into the shorts; that's the reason why it was sitting out square like that is that there was a sharp fold pushing down, on the other side because of the hand on the hip and the thumb going up there is a sharp fold.
I don't like how you tried to emphasis the feminine form. I think this is something that we easily get in the trap of because we don't want to hide our nice anatomy! But check out any fashion magazine, a good portion of high fashion actually doesn't cut in under the breasts, which just serves to put focus on the breasts instead of the cut of the garment.

Point noted on the angles of the circles, i will just say that this was a super quick sketch so i think that's excusable but i did touch it up on the pants. But you can get a way with a bit of it, as it can create bolder lines than having a circle, like i prefer having it flat on the far sleeve.

but yeah that is just the thoughts behind the design. Again thanks for the crit, it's pulled me up on making sure my eyes aren't derpy thats for sure. (been a more common problem than i like to admit lol).