08-23-2013, 05:03 AM
Hey JBZ
The left side is looking pretty good already.
THe right side wasn't working for me.
I kept looking at the pillar in the middle also.
I think I found a good way to reinforce the perspective pointing toward the girl and still let you keep you background.
Also, mind the perspective on your ellipses. They're looking a bit wonky here and there.
nevertheless, it's a well rendered image.
A few more hours of extra love and you've got yourself a great portfolio piece :)
The left side is looking pretty good already.
THe right side wasn't working for me.
I kept looking at the pillar in the middle also.
I think I found a good way to reinforce the perspective pointing toward the girl and still let you keep you background.
Also, mind the perspective on your ellipses. They're looking a bit wonky here and there.
nevertheless, it's a well rendered image.
A few more hours of extra love and you've got yourself a great portfolio piece :)