Forrest's Sketchbook of Wondercanes and Dreamsicles.

[Othrandir]

Looking good! People already told you about the faces and you're working on that, so I can't comment there. The only thing I can say ( and that is because I like it, it's not something you should DEFINITELY do ) is that you should introduce some more contrast and sharpness in your pieces. With a few more steps they would a much greater impact.

Here's an example :



Keep at it, man, You're doing great! :)

P.S. I love how you used the chain brush for the zipper of the jacket! :D