01-26-2014, 07:14 AM
(01-26-2014, 05:29 AM)darktiste Wrote: The arm is so low that it fail to make it seem like a first person.Also the shadow for me suggest that he is a midget.Maybe he is just falling on the floor it just not clear enought.The lighting of the piece could be more dramatic in my opinion.The eye of the creature could be the center of the piece to add drama.It a mirror without reflection?And for the last point the monster is to static(boring pose).Try to do thumbnail next time also the scene suggest me that you might want to work on perceptive because it all flat in the background.
Thanks for your comment! It's was kind of the first time for me in lot's of things in this image: 1st person view, interior mirror view, creature without a real human kinda face. So i kinda expected a lot of flaws. But these things you pointed out are really helpful. Thanks again!