02-22-2014, 02:38 AM
Boring is really good world cuz it immediately point the the problem. The story is boring. Not lack of details (that hardly ever help anyhow) I have no idea who is the main character here. Monster is the biggest and situated in strong point so maybe him? But i'm not convinced... You know the scenario and your task is to tell the story with picture. And you have two medium to achieve it Light and composition.
Monster is looking cool, guys shoes are cool, lazer pistol - cool! Tity girl also cool! But what connect them together?! You have too many main characters, everything is at the same level of importance (even crack in wall attracts too much attention) and in consequent all is flat.
Monster is looking cool, guys shoes are cool, lazer pistol - cool! Tity girl also cool! But what connect them together?! You have too many main characters, everything is at the same level of importance (even crack in wall attracts too much attention) and in consequent all is flat.