03-08-2014, 06:49 PM
Hey crackedskull don't want to be harsh but are you 100% sure about this composition? On which value thumbnails is it based? From what material buildings are made to be that dark in value? I bet you could push it much more to something interesting. Look just how much buildings takes space, is the city that important for the story? (Also you get yourself into painting a lot of uninteresting buildings, I'm personally too lazy and would avoid this like a plague :D ) They make statue looking small when I think the statue should dominate over city.
Try to expose more the sculptor and the relation of small and big statue. They should occupy most of the picture space.
About the design in which century is it happening? Is it Ancient Greece or Renaissance? I see street lamps so maybe Victorian? You need to know this all before rushing to picture. Spend more time on thumbnails this will build whole story in your head. You will not have time for it later. Later You will have to focus on lights and perspective!
Try to expose more the sculptor and the relation of small and big statue. They should occupy most of the picture space.
About the design in which century is it happening? Is it Ancient Greece or Renaissance? I see street lamps so maybe Victorian? You need to know this all before rushing to picture. Spend more time on thumbnails this will build whole story in your head. You will not have time for it later. Later You will have to focus on lights and perspective!