Lance's Juicy Fruity Sketchbook

[Samszym]

Nice drawins dude! I've been told very often thet cross hatching at 90 degrees has a sort of flattening, distracting effect. You might want to change the angle on your crosshatches a little so they're more directional.
You do seem to be using the hatching to create shapes a lot, you might want to try using some diluted ink and a brush instead of lines, it would be faster and less busy looking