02-08-2015, 09:55 AM
Cool stuff, Vompt!
One thing I'm noticing is that you cartoon a lot... which is fine, I love cartoons! Except that I can also see that you're primarily thinking in terms of two-dimensional forms. I can see a sort of two-dimensional style carry over to your life drawings, where it seems like you're focusing more on shapes than structures, and it seems to lose how the figures fit together in space.
You can clearly draw stuff in perspective, the little robot and geometric forms you do look pretty good. The line-art background piece you did looks fantastic. This is mostly a problem I'm noticing for your figures, your anatomy studies are conjunctions of shapes rather than forms, and there are perspective and sizing issues in a lot of places. I think you understand perspective and structure well where it doesn't apply to organic forms, so I think the best thing for you to do right now would be to study anatomy and the primitive shapes that compose the human (or animal) forms. Gottfried Bammes does nice planar breakdowns of the structures in the human form, so you might consider studying his work. c:
Keep it up!
One thing I'm noticing is that you cartoon a lot... which is fine, I love cartoons! Except that I can also see that you're primarily thinking in terms of two-dimensional forms. I can see a sort of two-dimensional style carry over to your life drawings, where it seems like you're focusing more on shapes than structures, and it seems to lose how the figures fit together in space.
You can clearly draw stuff in perspective, the little robot and geometric forms you do look pretty good. The line-art background piece you did looks fantastic. This is mostly a problem I'm noticing for your figures, your anatomy studies are conjunctions of shapes rather than forms, and there are perspective and sizing issues in a lot of places. I think you understand perspective and structure well where it doesn't apply to organic forms, so I think the best thing for you to do right now would be to study anatomy and the primitive shapes that compose the human (or animal) forms. Gottfried Bammes does nice planar breakdowns of the structures in the human form, so you might consider studying his work. c:
Keep it up!