CoreyH new SB

[Fedodika]

haha love that design!

I like the pose of the top right ones in this too
http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/attachme...?aid=72706

hmm when i look at it, a lot of the edges are good; the left (his right) leg could be narrowed a little near the calf, and brought out more. The arms look cool :), also try adding some hard edges around the eye, maybe like an eyelid that is kind of dark and the glowing orange from the eyes wouldn't hit it, thus making the face less blurry feeling

I see you're trying to fade the loincloth, but i think it'd be a better idea to blend the cloth in the background, and try to keep the loincloth a solid more consistent gradient with more subtle value changes;

It's also good you're doing those leg studies, i really recommend looking at the dude you're working on now and the proportions of his legs; like try to imagine them without armor or clothes and you will see the calves are very short, and I also think you could raise his waist a little.

Also look at the edges on the nostrils on his nose; try to keep that consistenct with things, like the light following the form; but yea man, keep polishing it, the lines are looking nice in the studies :)