10-20-2015, 05:54 AM
Hey zombie, your major elements are there and it is looking much better perspective-wise. I would say it just probably needs a few more layers of things in between the ones you have now, to give it a bit more depth and interest and life. Bushes in the foreground, a pier, maybe it's a lake with reeds in it etc. Also, unless it's by design, the mountain silhouettes are probably a bit too straight and simplistic. If you refined the silhouettes a bit (use reference) it will start to look more complete and also help us get the scale of them.
Again doesn't have to be a perfect piece, just do your best in the time then get onto the mood and colour stuff! :)
Again doesn't have to be a perfect piece, just do your best in the time then get onto the mood and colour stuff! :)