02-20-2016, 01:43 PM
Great Achi, much better read this time around! With the bottom two you want to start paying attention to scale cues to make sure you are getting the right balance. I feel things are looking too small in general with your architecture. Also be bold with your shapes. Being loose and not detailed doesn't mean you should do "sloppy" strokes (like in the bottom left one) where edges aren't defined and things tend to overlap and blend, but not with intent. In fact the opposite is true with thumbnails...they are probably more benefical down the line if they are simple but a bit more precise, rather than detailed but too loose. Great stuff!