Wasteland
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Hey, It's a nice piece rendering wise but it doesn't feel too interesting as far as narrative. If they're moving through the water you might see some ripples which would give a sense of movement and might make it more interesting. You could think of many reasons why these guys are in this place, maybe if you add some details to suggest what they are doing? I see guns, maybe you could add something in the image to suggest why they need the guns. it's nicely painted, there is just not much making me want to look at it for more than a few seconds which may be where the lack of response comes in.
I think you could improve it allot with a little more suggestion of story. Well done thus far!

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Wasteland - by Yanifska - 01-21-2016, 11:37 PM
RE: Wasteland - by artistebot - 01-22-2016, 04:06 AM
RE: Wasteland - by Yanifska - 01-22-2016, 04:08 AM
RE: Wasteland - by xelfereht - 01-24-2016, 09:19 PM
RE: Wasteland - by Yanifska - 01-24-2016, 09:50 PM
RE: Wasteland - by Amit Dutta - 01-30-2016, 08:27 AM
RE: Wasteland - by Yanifska - 02-06-2016, 12:53 AM

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