12-04-2020, 10:19 AM
My critique was going to be about your greyscale painting of the girl with the starry night sky behind her. It seems like there could be a lot more variation in your edges, as it currently looks like they are all soft edges with little variation. Also her nose looks a bit too long, especially considering that the viewer is looking up at her.
The painting of the bloke is a lot better and has a far more edge variation, not sure if the painting of the women is an older piece?. I would also suggest making sure your brush strokes follow the forms of the face(the part that jumps out to me is the left side of his face with the shadow under his cheekbone), but that can be more subjective. It also looks like the values can be pushed slightly more for a better read, but you've done a good job at showing the form of his face
The painting of the bloke is a lot better and has a far more edge variation, not sure if the painting of the women is an older piece?. I would also suggest making sure your brush strokes follow the forms of the face(the part that jumps out to me is the left side of his face with the shadow under his cheekbone), but that can be more subjective. It also looks like the values can be pushed slightly more for a better read, but you've done a good job at showing the form of his face