Joseph's shiny new sketchbook

[Jephyr]

Hi JC,

It's been a while since I commented on your work. You have an excellent understanding of anatomy and form as evidenced in those last two.

From my art anatomy days I'm guessing that those were shorter gesture or studies. Yes?

The only suggestion I could make is to punch up your darker values a bit — but I know shorter sessions don't always allow for that kind of detail.

Thanks for commenting over my way — you made a very good suggestion that I ran with