Rotohail's "Reclusive" SketchBook

[Fedodika]

its something i picked up from Steve Huston and Mattessi, if you have 2 lines colliding into one another it breaks motion, and it shows the motion will like slam into the other. Thats fine if the image is crafted that way but yours just feels weird with this flow of energy. The red thing on the left is almost straight (plain diagonal) and isnt curving like the purple thing, so it breaks that slamming motion. Also just pushed the sass up in the profile girl, arch the back more, it looks more confident and assertive. And dialing back the colors, again with just a dull blue on a colorize layer, makes it much easier on the eyes. See how much you can pull out saturation wise, once you throw all the strong colors in.

Strong color looks strong based on what its surrounded by, greys are your friend ;)