Rotohail's "Reclusive" SketchBook

[Fedodika]

I think the issue with the city is it is a very close size to the rocks right next to it, the levels arent varyting whereas the rocks on the right have a lot of size variation. maybe chop into one on the top left a bit and make the town not feature two nearly identical cube shapes, throw like a house shape or a triangular shape; the cyllindrical buildings dont have to be so far back.

Theres a lot of little details like an awning and some red coming from the city but i cant really read them at first, everything feels really clustered together so the silhouettes arent clear.

You could also consider, since the figure is rendered pretty well, placing him much closer to the camera to vary the size relationships even more. I also feel like the rocks are leading the eye, as well as the clouds are leading the eye in this cone shape, but it ends at a very empty area, almost as if the town should be there instead of the left side of the canvas where there already is a lot of heavy subject matter, IE. figure and city.

I havent done many landscapes, but those are the inuitions that come to me at least