Vitor sketchbook

[VitorCardoso]

I hope you don't mind me trying a few thing on the artline.One thing i noted is the leak of wrapping on the leg. Mostly what i suggest is that you give a lineweight difference between your shadow and lite side if you ain't going to throw any cast shadow or occlusion shadow.You can note a bit of the different on the shoe on the left side is without directional lineweight and the right one is with all three thing i mentioned SC OCC DIRECTION

Sadly or not you took something with a lot of detail so it must have took away alot of the time toward detailling if you want to practice line art i suggest simply to use primitive no need to do complex drawing this way you can focus 100% on thinking about the principle at play.The beauty of fundamental is that they still do apply to any drawing so even if the subject is boring there plenty of opportunity to play with light and  lineweight.

You did such a great job that i actually couldn't stop myself from wanting to go further and color it.I wanted to try something outside my usual color and had a neon color palette in mind for a while now but my usual subject matter wouldn't allow for it so i thought this would be a great opportunity to try something outside my box.Hope you enjoy.

There is no harmony between the colors because everything is too saturated. Making a neon palette does not mean saturating everything. This makes the image not pleasant to look at.

    I agree about the lack of line weight on this one, however this was my first attempt I didn't know how to use the brushes efficiently but I got better next time, you can see the difference with the top image