Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook

[darktiste]

I feel like the composition is to left heavy i think you could crop a bite the right side of the frame and you wouldn't lost that much information you can still capture one side of the door and that be enough information to indicate a possible double door.

One other thing is how the floor and the wall are equally lite for an artist view point this could be a red flag of lighting inconsistency or it it intentional but i always like to bring something like this to the attention of the artist so they can be aware of it if they miss it themselve.

There seem to be a recurring scene involving hallway going on in what you shown so far.There way to control were the eye go you don't have to limit yourself to almost empty background but sometime less is more.