06-21-2020, 08:36 AM
Hi Graphicnovelist, I agree with Pubic Enemy that the page flows well and the surface plot is easy to understand - someone is being executed in the people's name. Although I did have to look twice to realise the grey mass around the platform was supposed to be a crowd of people - at first I thought it was shrubbery - maybe consider adding a little more detail to the crowd?
Also it's not clear who is shouting "In the people's name ..." is it the executioner or someone off panel?
Just a few questions to help your process hopefully.
Good luck and keep going!
Also it's not clear who is shouting "In the people's name ..." is it the executioner or someone off panel?
Just a few questions to help your process hopefully.
Good luck and keep going!
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